Homework from the Feedback (3)
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. What is your ideal job?
A1. I don\'t have any ideal job.
Q2. What seems to be the most prestigious job in your country right now?
A2. The most prestigious job in my country is to work for the government.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
You can write short sentences and the basics of English writing are covered well. To advance to the next level of English writing, I recommend that the student practice writing at home. ~ Teacher QUENNY.
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Q1. What is your ideal job?
>> What is your ideal job? (CORRECT)
A1. I don\'t have any ideal job.
>> I don\'t have any ideal job. (CORRECT)
Q2. What seems to be the most prestigious job in your country right now?
>> What seems to be the most prestigious job in your country right now? (CORRECT)
A2. The most prestigious job in my country is to work for the government.
>> The most prestigious job in my country is to work for the government. (CORRECT)
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Q1. What is your ideal job?
A1. I don\'t have any ideal job.
Q2. What seems to be the most prestigious job in your country right now?
A2. The most prestigious job in my country is to work for the government.
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