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Q1. What type of apartment do you live in?
A1. I don\'t know the type of apartment that I live in.
Q2. What do you prefer: renting or having your own house?
A2. I think having an own house is better because we need to leave if we rent the house.
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Hi [이름],
Owning a home can be empowering and emotionally rewarding because buying a home allows you to build wealth over time. It\'s more stable and familiar. And buying a house is a big expense, but it for some people, it\'s worth it to have the emotional connection to a home you own, and a sense of stability that renting won\'t bring. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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Q1. What type of apartment do you live in?
Q1. What type of apartment do you live in? (CORRECT)
A1. I don\'t know the type of apartment that I live in.
A1. I don\'t know the type of apartment that I live in. (CORRECT)
Q2. What do you prefer: renting or having your own house?
Q2. What do you prefer: renting or having your own house? (CORRECT)
A2. I think having an own house is better because we need to leave if we rent the house.
>> I think having your own house is better because we can live in that house for a long time compared to renting a house.
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Q1. What type of apartment do you live in?
A1. I don\'t know the type of apartment that I live in.
Q2. What do you prefer: renting or having your own house?
A2. I think having an own house is better because we need to leave if we rent the house.
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