Homework from the lesson Nov 3rd 2021
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Nov 03 2021
Homework: What things in your life would you hate to change?
As of present, I am someone who is facing many changes. With the life slowly returning to that of before the Covid virus, I have been setting up a plan to go back to Canada once again and start pursuing what I had put off 2 years ago because of the pandemic. Therefore, I consider myself someone who is willing to face changes, albeit the concern and fear.
However, even as a person who have been actively changing many things in life, certainly there are things I would never willingly change. Among the list of things, I will be writing about the top three.
The third thing I would never change is the way I feel with animals, especially dogs. Ever since I was a little kid, I was fond of dogs. I have never understood the idea of loathing a dog, however feral or vicious it can be. With dogs always existing in my future plans, I would never change the passion I have towards them.
The second thing I would hate to
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Nov. 03, 2021
Homework: What things in your life would you hate to change?
As of present, I am someone who is facing many changes.
Homework: What things in your life would you hate to change?
As of present, I am someone who is facing many changes.
>> At present, I am someone who is facing many changes.
However, even as a person who have been actively changing many things in life, certainly there are things I would never willingly change.
The third thing I would never change is the way I feel with animals, especially dogs.
With the life slowly returning to that of before the Covid virus, I have been setting up a plan to go back to Canada once again and start pursuing what I had put off 2 years ago because of the pandemic.
>> With life slowly returning to pre-COVID normal, I have been setting up a plan to go back to Canada once again and start pursuing what I had put off two years ago because of the pandemic.
Therefore, I consider myself someone who is willing to face changes, albeit the concern and fear.
>> Therefore, I consider myself someone willing to face changes, albeit the concern and fear.
However, even as a person who have been actively changing many things in life, certainly there are things I would never willingly change.
>> However, even as a person who has been actively changing many things in life, certainly there are things I would never willingly change.
Among the list of things, I will be writing about the top three.
>> This is a good sentence.
The third thing I would never change is the way I feel with animals, especially dogs.
>> The third thing I would never change is the way I feel about animals, especially dogs.
Ever since I was a little kid, I was fond of dogs.
>> Ever since I was a little kid, I have been fond of dogs.
I have never understood the idea of loathing a dog, however feral or vicious it can be.
>> This is a good sentence.
With dogs always existing in my future plans, I would never change the passion I have towards them.
>> With dogs always existing in my plans, I would never change the passion I have towards them.
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