Homework(future life)

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~~May~~

Invention presents new technologies and ideas in energy , transportation and communication .

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For one, lots of transportation has developed quickly. When I was young, I saw train tops speeds slow, so the entire trips takes a long time to go my destination.
>>Transportation has developed quickly.

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But, these days the train is faster than before.

>> But these days, trains are faster than before.

Our train has changed the mode of train travel with its high speed and comfort.

>> Our train has changed in terms of comfort and speed.

Traveling by train banish the weariness of a long railway journey.

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Besides, it is one of the safest methods of all transports.

>> Besides, it is one of the safest public transport.

A train ride is a common form which is often used in Our country.
>> Train is a common public transport in our country.
In the future, it may be possible to sit back and relax while we ride train with ease.

>> In the future, it may be possible to sit back and relax while we ride A train with ease.

As we anticipate, the railroad is connected with all countries and we can use a tunnel under the sea. so a train runs under the sea.

>> As we anticipate, the countries are connected by the railroads and we can use an underwater tunnel, so a train runs under the sea.

Train will be the most common method to experience new world in the near future.

>> A train will be the most common method to experience new world in the near future.