Homework : Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.

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There are mixed opinions about which transportation governments should encourage.

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So it is difficult to select what is the more effective system.

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In this essay, I will talk about these advantages and explain my opinions.

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First of all, some people prefer to take a bus or a car.

>> First of all, some people prefer to take the bus or a car.
Road vehicles would cause convenience to take a close place.

>> Road vehicles would be convenient to take us to close places.
However, it would engender noise and air pollution that might affect people\'s health in a negative way.

>> However, it would engender noise and air pollution that might affect negatively people health.
These disadvantages can get more strengthened as much as the number of the drivers have increased.

>> These disadvantages could be worse as the number of drivers increase.
So I suggest that governments should invest railway system to avoid these problems.

>> So I suggest that the government should invest on a railway system to avoid these problems.
Subway and railway can be useful because these help us to meet someone on time.

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Furthermore, this approach might not only minimize the air pollution but also transfer more passengers than cars, especially during rush hours.
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As a result, I believe that railway is more effective.

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So government should invest more money to the railway system.

>>  So the government should invest more money on a railway system.