Homework(happy Seollal)

2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

\'The ways to go home\' New Year\'s Day comes here again this year. The holiday period is from February 3 to 6. From today and tomorrow, the transition to home starts. There are several ways to go home in our country. First, the most common way is to use public transportation. We can go by train(KTX, Saemaeulho, Mugunghwa) or we can go by bus (direct bus and superior bus). Second, in case we don\'t use public transportation, we can go by car. The highway was well connected throughout the country. (However, it takes more time than usual for the holiday.) Third, After using public transportation, we can go by ship or airplane. For example, One of my friends is from Jeju Island. He always used an airplane to go home. He always should make a reservation long ago because it\'s hard to get the ticket for holiday. Why so many people go home? it may be because there is a hometown where loving family and memories are alive. -Have a happy holiday with your family & friends~ see you again.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing about Seollal! I hope that you have a good holiday with your family.

I will also go to my hometown tonight. It takes 3 hours by bus, so I am going to travel too.

Enjoy [이름]!

~~May~~

New Year\'s Day comes here again this year.

>> New Year\'s Day comes again this year.

The holiday period is from February 3 to 6.

>> CORRECT

From today and tomorrow, the transition to home starts.

>> From today until tomorrow, preparation at home starts.

There are several ways to go home in our country.

>> There are several ways to commute going to hometown in our country.

First, the most common way is to use public transportation. We can go by train(KTX, Saemaeulho, Mugunghwa) or we can go by bus (direct bus and superior bus).

Second, in case we don\'t use public transportation, we can go by car. The highway was well connected throughout the country. (However, it takes more time than usual for the holiday.)
Third, After using public transportation, we can go by ship or airplane.

For example, One of my friends is from Jeju Island. He always used an airplane to go home.

>> CORRECT

He always should make a reservation long ago because it\'s hard to get the ticket for holiday.

>> He always make a reservation because it\'s hard to get a ticket during holidays.

Why so many people go home?

>> Why do many people go home?

it may be because there is a hometown where loving family and memories are alive.

>> Maybe because they have their hometown that keep the memories with the family alive.

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