Homework : Has someone ever spread a rumor about you

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~~ Teacher Sharon

I have few experiences that have strugled me.

>> I have a few experiences that have made me struggle.
However, now a unpleasant memory pops in my mind.

>> An unpleasant memory comes to mind now.
In this essay, I will talk about this event and explain my emotion at that time.

>> Correct
First of all, that event was happened at the middle school.

>> First of all, that event happened in middle school.
I tend to talk too much to be closed with some friends

>>  I tend to talk too much to be close with some friends.
However,these efforts are shown as wrong ways to them.

>> However, others took this the wrong way.
When I went to a picnic, I could realize that they avoided me.

>> Correct
This is because, I went to a picnic spot alone

>> That\'s why I was all by myself at the picnic spot.
although we made an appointment about how to get there.

>> I was alone even if we made plans together.
I tried to act carefully and to make a distance with them.

>> I tried to keep my distance from them.
As a result, we were fortunately closed again through these efforts.

>> As a result, we became close again.
According to korean researches, the number of problems in institutions have increased in Korea.

>> According to Korean research, the number of problems in institutions have increased in Korea.
This is so serious problems, even though I have a good result from bullying.

>> These are serious problems, even though in my case, it ended differently.
So many people should be try to solve these problems.

>>  So people should try to solve these problems.