HOMEWORK: Have you ever appreciated a sunset? Were you alone or with someone special?

2019-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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Yes, I have appreciated a sunset. When I took a walk alone near my grandmother\'s house, I saw the sun set. It was really beautiful!!

강사 첨삭

Hello Julia! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful holiday with your family and friends! :)

- Tricia

Yes, I have appreciated a sunset.
>> CORRECT!

When I took a walk alone near my grandmother\'s house, I saw the sun set.
>> When I took a walk alone near my grandmother\'s house, I saw the sunset.

It was really beautiful!!
>> CORRECT!

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