Homework : Have you ever revealed someone's secret when you weren't supposed to?

2018-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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No. I don’t have. This is because I don’t want to be faithless. If someone says me his or her secret, It is sure for them to trust me. I don’t want to break this faith so I would keep their secrets. Most people would be like me. However, some people reveal someone’s secret to take profit themselves. It’s not difficult to see that someone says other’s secrets. Their subjects might be money, relationship and fun. They will definitely lose trust even though we can’t exactly suppose their subjects. So we have to avoid to say our secrets to them. In conclusion, we should distinguish who is trustable or not and we have to unveil secret to trustable people so that we can make solid relationship and faith. Furthermore, we don’t need to get shocked by faithless people.

강사 첨삭

Hi Allen!

You shared some good points today.

I enjoyed reading your composition.

Keep it up!

I\'ll see you later!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

No. I don’t have.

>> No, I haven\'t.
This is because I don’t want to be faithless.

>> This is because I don’t want to be untrustworthy.
If someone says me his or her secret, It is sure for them to trust me.

>>  If someone tells me his or her secret, I make sure that thy can trust me.
I don’t want to break this faith so I would keep their secrets.

>> Correct
Most people would be like me.

>> Most people are like me.
However, some people reveal someone’s secret to take profit themselves.

>> However, some people reveal someone’s secret for their own benefit.
It’s not difficult to see that someone says other’s secrets.

>> It’s not difficult to find out if somebody reveals a secret.
Their subjects might be money, relationship and fun.

>> Secrets can be about money, relationship and fun. 
 They will definitely lose trust even though we can’t exactly suppose their subjects.

>>  They will definitely lose trust even though they don\'t go into the details.
 So we have to avoid to say our secrets to them.

>>  So we have to avoid telling them our secrets.
In conclusion, we should distinguish who is trustable or not

>> In conclusion, we should distinguish who is trustworthy or not.
and we have to unveil secret to trustable people

>> We must share our secrets with only trustworthy people.
so that we can make solid relationship and faith.

>> so that we can keep our relationships strong.
 Furthermore, we don’t need to get shocked by faithless people.

>>  Furthermore, we don’t need to get shocked by untrustworthy people.

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