Homework : Have you ever revealed someone's secret when you weren't supposed to?
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No. I don’t have.
>> No, I haven\'t.
This is because I don’t want to be faithless.
>> This is because I don’t want to be untrustworthy.
If someone says me his or her secret, It is sure for them to trust me.
>> If someone tells me his or her secret, I make sure that thy can trust me.
I don’t want to break this faith so I would keep their secrets.
>> Correct
Most people would be like me.
>> Most people are like me.
However, some people reveal someone’s secret to take profit themselves.
>> However, some people reveal someone’s secret for their own benefit.
It’s not difficult to see that someone says other’s secrets.
>> It’s not difficult to find out if somebody reveals a secret.
Their subjects might be money, relationship and fun.
>> Secrets can be about money, relationship and fun.
They will definitely lose trust even though we can’t exactly suppose their subjects.
>> They will definitely lose trust even though they don\'t go into the details.
So we have to avoid to say our secrets to them.
>> So we have to avoid telling them our secrets.
In conclusion, we should distinguish who is trustable or not
>> In conclusion, we should distinguish who is trustworthy or not.
and we have to unveil secret to trustable people
>> We must share our secrets with only trustworthy people.
so that we can make solid relationship and faith.
>> so that we can keep our relationships strong.
Furthermore, we don’t need to get shocked by faithless people.
>> Furthermore, we don’t need to get shocked by untrustworthy people.
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