Homework : How can using social networking sites invade your privacy?

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Although there is no doubt about the importance on our privacy in the Internet,I strongly believe that all of the involvers should try to protect their privacy.

>> Although there is no doubt as to the importance of privacy on the Internet, I strongly believe that all people concerned should try to protect their own privacy.
In this essay, I will talk about the violations and suggest several ways to protect from that.

>> In this essay, I will talk about the violations and suggest several ways to prevent them.
Firstly, a lot of bad people have gathered the personal information using illegal ways.

>> Firstly, a lot of bad people have gathered personal information using illegal ways.
For example, people usually leave some texts included their privacy on SNS services.

>> For example, people usually send private texts using SNS services.
Some criminals can get specific information related to children like parents\' name, their hobbies, even and the place that they went to last weekend.

>> Some criminals can get specific information related to children like parents\' name, their hobbies, even the places where they go on weekends.
These can result in horrible problems such as kidnapping because of the SNS posts from their parents.

>> Correct
Therefore, we should make efforts to protect our privacy.

>> Therefore, we should exert efforts to protect our privacy.
Common people should avoid unnecessary usage of SNS to prevent some crimes.

>> Correct
The governments should strengthen the policy to punish criminals that illegally collect personal informations.

>> The government should increase the penalty for criminals who illegally collect personal information.
Lastly, service providers must try to secure systems from hackings.

>> Lastly, service providers must try to secure systems from hackers.