Homework : How can we preserve the future for the next generation?

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It is true that we should prepare the future for the next generation.

>> It is true that we should prepare for the future of the next generation.
In this essay, I will talk about the way of preserving all of that we have and discuss my opinions.

>> Correct
Firstly, we also have to protect our heritage of the past plus environment of the present.

>> Firstly, we have to protect our heritage and the environment.
This is because it doesn’t represent only our identities and history, but also helps developments in the future.

>>This is because it doesn’t only represent our identities and history, but also helps development in the future.
For example, we invent a lot of things and advanced technics basing on technology from the past.

>> For example, we invent a lot of things and advance our technology from the past.
So it is so important to preserve our heritage from the past and the present.

>> Correct
Secondly, people should protect and enhance our natural environment.

>> Correct
Nature has been destroyed with our development since modern society.

>> Nature has been destroyed with our development in the modern society.
There is no doubt that nature positively influences our life.

>>There is no doubt that nature positively influences our lives.
So this role will not be changed over the next generation.

>> So this role will not change over the next generation.
As a result, it is a role of this generation to preserve the heritage and protect nature.

>> As a result, it is the role of this generation to preserve our heritage and protect nature.
I’m sure that it will be helpful to next generation.

>> I’m sure that it will be helpful for the next generation.