HOMEWORK: How could you make fruit juices by yourself? / What fruits juices are best for you?
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when make a fruit juice, I put fruits in mixer and mix them.
I like mango juice most.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji An,
There is one bright spot: Fruit juice offers some nutrients. Studies show drinking no more than five ounces a day is linked to a lower risk of heart disease and stroke. So a small amount of fruit juice seems to be OK, but too much sugar from all sources — including juice — is linked to poor health outcomes. Take Care.. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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when make a fruit juice, I put fruits in mixer and mix them.
>> When I make fruit juice, I put the fruits in the mixer and mix them together.
I like mango juice most.
>> Mango juice is the best for me and I really like the taste of it.
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when make a fruit juice, I put fruits in mixer and mix them.
I like mango juice most.
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