HOMEWORK: How do you cheer up a friend if he or she is overwhelmed by how much he or she has to do?
학생이 쓴 원문
If my friend is overwhelmed by how much he or she has to do, I cheer up my friend by buying him of her delicious food.
He or she feels better after he or she eat food.
And while eating delicious food, I listen to his or her story.
강사 첨삭
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And while eating delicious food, I listen to his or her story.
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- Tricia
If my friend is overwhelmed by how much he or she has to do, I cheer up my friend by buying him of her delicious food.
>> If my friends are overwhelmed by they have to do, I cheer them up by buying them delicious food.
He or she feels better after he or she eat food.
>> They might feel better after eating the food.
And while eating delicious food, I listen to his or her story.
>> And while eating delicious food, I listen to their story.
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