Homework : How does a generation gap affect interaction between two people?
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There is no doubt that a generation gap between older and younger people affects their interaction.
>> Correct
There are not only positive effects but also negative effects.
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I will talk about these effects and argue my opinions.
>> I will talk about these effects and present my arguments.
Firstly, I will explain the positive effects about that.
>> Firstly, I will explain the positive effects of a generation gap.
Older generations have many experiences that younger people don’t have yet.
>> People from the older generations have many experiences that younger people don’t have yet.
That would cause positive results at any workplace.
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Secondly, it negatively influences their interaction.
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hey have different experiences about society, culture, even and environment.
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hat would negatively result in their relationship between them.
>> That would affect their relationship in a negative way.
However, it should be solved anyway.
>>Correct
As a result, people have to gain this positive one and break negative effects.
>> In conclusion, people have to focus on the positive effects of the generation gap.
f these efforts are maintained for a long time, it might make our life improved.
>> If these efforts are maintained for a long time, it might even improve all our lives.
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