Homework : How have shopping habits changed over recent years?

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We can see easily how the shopping habits have changed for last years.

>> We can easily see how shopping habits have changed for the last few years.
For a long time, Shopping habits have been transforming relating to our development.

>> For a long time, shopping habits have been transforming in proportion to our development.
This essay discuss about the change about these habits from past to now.

>> This essay discusses the changes in these habits from the past up to now.
Several years ago, when the technology doesn’t develop enough yet, people should go to the off-line shops to buy products that they need. Their trade way was limited and it caused inconvinience.

>> Several years ago, when the technology was not yet fully developed, people went to real  shops to buy products that they need.

Their trade way was limited and it caused inconvenience.

>> Their options as consumers were limited and it caused inconvenience.
On the other hand, the methods of purchase have varied now.

>> On the other hand, there are numerous methods of purchase at present.

People don’t need to go to the off-line shops anymore.

>> People don’t need to go to the real shops anymore.

Most customers feel more convinience.

>> It is more convenient for customers.

For example, some providers such as the Amazon can deliver goods to even inside of their customers’ houses. the development of technology makes that possible.

>> For example, some providers, such as Amazon, can deliver goods to their customers’ houses.

the development of technology makes that possible.

>> The development of technology makes that possible.
In conclusion, the technology have affected to the relationship between customers and providers to expand the range of purchase and make these ways of trade easier and useful.

>> In conclusion, technology has affected the relationship between customers and providers in a way that it expands the range of purchase and make these ways of trade easier and more useful.