(Homework)How is our accent affected by our birthplace?
학생이 쓴 원문
i think that every people affected by their birthplace. because they are affected by their\'s parents and brothers and sisters.
first of everyday most of the babies listen their parents saying and see their mouth and so on...
naturally babies can catch mouth shape and follow them. furthermore, they grow up by saying their\'s parents sound alike.
finally i was born in Korea so i am good at Korean. however i am not good at English.
but i am learning speaking practice hard and then i will good at English speaker
강사 첨삭
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CONTENT:
1. i think that every people affected by their birthplace. because they are affected by their\'s parents and brothers and sisters.
-- I think that everyone is affected by their birthplace because they are influenced by their parents, brothers, and sisters.
2. first of everyday most of the babies listen their parents saying and see their mouth and so on...
-- From the very beginning, most babies listen to their parents speaking and watch their mouths.
3. naturally babies can catch mouth shape and follow them. furthermore, they grow up by saying their\'s parents sound alike.
-- Naturally, babies can notice mouth shapes and imitate them. Furthermore, they grow up speaking like their parents.
4. finally i was born in Korea so i am good at Korean. however i am not good at English.
-- Finally, I was born in Korea, so I am fluent in Korean. However, I am not good at English.
5. but i am learning speaking practice hard and then i will good at English speaker
-- But I am practicing speaking hard, and I will become a good English speaker.
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