HOMEWORK: How would people know they have made the right [이름]ice?

2026-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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I think there is no certain way to suggest people the right [이름]ice when people make decisions for the future. People are often placed in situations, like having to [이름]ose a more suitable path in their lives. For example, someone can be confused about job options or career paths. To make the right [이름]ice, people consider many factors carefully. However, the important point is that we can\'t know our future exactly, so we should accept the uncertainty. Instead of dwelling on the past and spending time worrying, it is better to look forward to the future and think positively about myself. Through moving forward and doing one\'s best, people can turn their past decisions into better results. I also want to become more confident in my [이름]ice and try my best in my daily life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Isaac!

Thank you for doing your homework. Have a great day^^

Here are some points for improvement:

1. I think there is no certain way to suggest people the right [이름]ice when people make decisions for the future. 
>>I think there is no certain way to suggest the right [이름]ice to people when they make decisions about the future.

2. People are often placed in situations, like having to [이름]ose a more suitable path in their lives. 
>>People are often placed in situations where they have to [이름]ose a more suitable path in their lives.

3. For example, someone can be confused about job options or career paths. 
>>CORRECT!

4. To make the right [이름]ice, people consider many factors carefully. 
>>To make the right [이름]ice, people carefully consider many factors.

5. However, the important point is that we can\'t know our future exactly, so we should accept the uncertainty. 
>>CORRECT!

6. Instead of dwelling on the past and spending time worrying, it is better to look forward to the future and think positively about myself. 
>>Instead of dwelling on the past and spending time worrying, it is better to look forward to the future and think positively about ourselves.

7. Through moving forward and doing one\'s best, people can turn their past decisions into better results. 
>>By moving forward and doing their best, people can turn their past decisions into better results.

8. I also want to become more confident in my [이름]ice and try my best in my daily life.
>>I also want to become more confident in my [이름]ices and try my best in my daily life.

Note: There are only minor corrections in your entire answer. Keep it up! 

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