homework(If you could be born at a different time period, when would it be?)
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Q. If you could be born at a different time period, when would it be?
A.
if I could be born at a diffrent time period, I would born at 1980 in Korea.
Because It was the high growth of economy. At that time, Even saving in the Bank they give a high interest of rate, 15 percentage. But now interest of all bank in Korea is 1~2 percentage.
I want to get rich ^^
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if I could be born at a diffrent time period, I would born at 1980 in Korea.
>>If I could be born at a diffrent time period, I would be born at 1980 in Korea.
Because It was the high growth of economy.
>>CORRECT
At that time, Even saving in the Bank they give a high interest of rate, 15 percentage.
>>At that time, saving in the bank will give a high interest of rate, of 15 percentage.
But now interest of all bank in Korea is 1~2 percentage.
>>But now the interest rate of all bank in Korea is 1~2 percentage.
I want to get rich ^^
>>CORRECT
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