(Homework)If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, it may be taken shape more than now after I experiense the world more.
Then now, I want to live in Japan if I could.
Because, I visited Japan twice and it\'s my most visiting number.
So I am very familiar to Japan. Surely, every trips are very very good to me.
Their foods are delicious. And clerks in any restaurant are so benevolent, benign, and also cheerful.
Now the relationship between Korea and Japan is bad, but I wish it will get better soon.
I and my three BFs(they also like Japan) often talk about marrying with four japanese sisters whose father is master of sushi restautaurant.
Ha Ha :)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for taking time in doing your homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
And, you made me smile with this one. Of all my students, they say they hate Japan and Japanese people. I\'m surprised to know from you that you actually like Japan and even plan of marrying a Japanese! ^ ^ Awesome! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Well, it may be taken shape more than now after I experiense the world more.
>>It has taken shape more now after I have experienced the world more.
Then now, I want to live in Japan if I could.
Then now, I want to live in Japan if I could.
>>I want to live in Japan if I could.
Because, I visited Japan twice and it\'s my most visiting number.
Because, I visited Japan twice and it\'s my most visiting number.
>>I have visited Japan twice and it\'s the place I have visited the most.
So I am very familiar to Japan.
So I am very familiar to Japan.
>>So, I am very familiar with Japan.
Surely, every trips are very very good to me.
>>Of course, all the trips I had were awesome for me.
Their foods are delicious.
Their foods are delicious.
>>The varieties of food are delicious.
And clerks in any restaurant are so benevolent, benign, and also cheerful.
>>Correct
Now the relationship between Korea and Japan is bad, but I wish it will get better soon.
Now the relationship between Korea and Japan is bad, but I wish it will get better soon.
>>Correct
I and my three BFs(they also like Japan) often talk about marrying with four japanese sisters whose father is master of sushi restautaurant.
I and my three BFs(they also like Japan) often talk about marrying with four japanese sisters whose father is master of sushi restautaurant.
>>I and my three BFs(they also like Japan) often talk about marrying Japanese women, all of which are sisters and whose father is a master of a sushi restaurant.
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