Homework-If you could travel anywhere, where would you go and why?
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Hello [이름]. Oh please, take me with you! I also saw it on TV and it looks splendid. It would be an amazing experience to get to see it with your own eyes. Hope we get to witness it in our lifetime. Enjoy your day!
- T. Beth
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If I can travel anywhere, I would like to visit Ireland for aurora hunting.
>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: If I get to travel anywhere, I would like to go to Ireland to seek for aurora.
I watchded a TV program which shows all over the world and Ireland was introduced for its beautiful aurora.
>>> I watched a TV program which shows different places around the world and Ireland was introduced for its beautiful aurora.
There are some other places which are famous for aurora such as Yellow Knife or Whitehorse in Canada.
>>> CORRECT.
However as I have never been to Ireland, I want to go there someday.
>>> CORRECT.
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