Homework : If you needed to earn some extra money, how would you do that?

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People might spend their extra money doing many things.

>> People might spend their extra money on different things.
Some people would buy some goods that they want.

>> Correct
Other people might occasionally save in banks.

>>  Other people might occasionally save their money in banks.
In this essay, I will talk about several expenditures when I get extra money.

>> In this essay, I will talk about the things I spend my extra money on.
Firstly, the best favorite is spending for a trip.

>> Firstly, I really like spending my money on trips.
I have an idea that life is once only.

>> I am of the opinion that we only live once.
I try to do my favorite as possible as I can.

>> I try to do what I want as often as I can.
Therefore, One of the most things that I prefer is travelling to enjoy my life.

>> Therefore, I prefer travelling to enjoy my life.
Traveling has many advantages in many ways.

>>  Traveling has many advantages.
For example, I can see many cultural appearance and experience many things.

>>  For example, I can experience a lot of things and different cultures.
The second favorite is saving at a bank or pay my debt.

>> Second, I also like to save my money in banks or to pay off my debts.
Most people in Korea have debts to buy houses or pay for enrolling universities and so on.

>>  Most people in Korea have debts to buy houses or pay for college fees and so on.
I also borrow money to buy a house when I get married.

>>  I also borrowed money to buy a house when I got married.
So I should repay my debt when I get extra money.

>> So I should repay my debt whenever I get extra money.