HOMEWORK: If you were the leader of your school, what changes would you make?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were the leader of my school, I would put some air fresheners in the rest rooms.
It will make the air in the rest rooms more fragrant than before.
And I would make a lounge which can play board game, and chat away with a friend during a break.
Because the classroom is too small to play the board game.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! :)
It will make the air in the rest rooms more fragrant than before.
And I would make a lounge which can play board game, and chat away with a friend during a break.
Because the classroom is too small to play the board game.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
If I were the leader of my school, I would put some air fresheners in the rest rooms.
>> If I were the leader of my school, I would put some air fresheners in the restrooms.
It will make the air in the rest rooms more fragrant than before.
>> It will make the air in the restrooms more fragrant than before.
And I would make a lounge which can play board game, and chat away with a friend during a break.
>> And I would make a lounge where we can play board games, and chat with our friends during the break.
Because the classroom is too small to play the board game.
>> Because our classrooms are too small to play board games.
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