Homework) In a globalized world, is the concept of strict national identity becoming outdated?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think in a globalized world, the concept of strict national identify is necessary.
This is because we need to live safety by organized society.
But the most important thing is we have to always keep in mind that.
Difference is not discrimination.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I think in a globalized world, the concept of strict national identify is necessary.
>> I think that in a globalized world, the concept of a strict national identity is necessary.
This is because we need to live safety by organized society.
>> This is because we need to live safely in an organized society.
But the most important thing is we have to always keep in mind that. Difference is not discrimination.
>> However, the most important thing is that we must always keep in mind that difference is not discrimination.
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