HOMEWORK: In five sentences tell us what do you do on Saturdays and Sundays.
학생이 쓴 원문
On Saturday morning, I went to the mart with my family.
I bought a mechanical pencil there.
And I went to a math academy on Saturday afternoon.
I studied hard at math academy.
And I was at home all day long on Sunday.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! :)
I bought a mechanical pencil there.
And I went to a math academy on Saturday afternoon.
I studied hard at math academy.
And I was at home all day long on Sunday.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful Monday night. :)
- Tricia
On Saturday morning, I went to the mart with my family.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> On Saturdays, I usually go to the mart with my family.
I bought a mechanical pencil there.
>> CORRECT!
And I went to a math academy on Saturday afternoon.
>> And I went to my math academy in the afternoon.
I studied hard at math academy.
>> I studied hard at my math academy.
And I was at home all day long on Sunday.
>> And I just stayed home on Sunday.
OR>> I usually stay home on Sundays.
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