Homework in Friday

2012-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Where did you grow up? Describe the place? Are you still living there? Hi, Faye. I had great time talking to you and I really enjoyed talking with you. I grew up in Suwon, Korea. Suwon as a word means the source of the water.so, It has a lot of various creeks. Also, the Hwaseong Ftress in Suwon is designated as National Treasure UNESCO world Hertage site. I'm so proud of it as a citizen in Suwon and I'm still living here.

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Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. I really had a great time talking to you too. I think Suwon is a nice place especially that it means sourece of water. Like you are so rich with water there. ^^ See you on Monday! Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: Where did you grow up? Describe the place? Are you still living there?Hi, Faye. I had great time talking to you and I really enjoyed talking with you.>>I had a great time talking to you and I really enjoyed it.I grew up in Suwon, Korea. >>Correct! Suwon as a word means the source of the water. >>Suwon means the source of water. so, It has a lot of various creeks. >>So, it has various kinds of creeks. Also, the Hwaseong Ftress in Suwon is designated as National Treasure UNESCO world Hertage site. >>Correct! I\'m so proud of it as a citizen in Suwon and I\'m still living here. >>I'm so proud to be a citizen of Suwon and I'm still living here.

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