Homework in Friday
학생이 쓴 원문
Where did you grow up? Describe the place? Are you still living there?
Hi, Faye. I had great time talking to you and I really enjoyed talking with you.
I grew up in Suwon, Korea. Suwon as a word means the source of the water.so, It has a lot of various creeks. Also, the Hwaseong Ftress in Suwon is designated as National Treasure UNESCO world Hertage site. I'm so proud of it as a citizen in Suwon and I'm still living here.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. I really had a great time talking to you too. I think Suwon is a nice place especially that it means sourece of water. Like you are so rich with water there. ^^ See you on Monday!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
Where did you grow up? Describe the place? Are you still living there?Hi, Faye.
I had great time talking to you and I really enjoyed talking with you.>>I had a great time talking to you and I really enjoyed it.I grew up in Suwon, Korea.
>>Correct!
Suwon as a word means the source of the water.
>>Suwon means the source of water.
so, It has a lot of various creeks.
>>So, it has various kinds of creeks.
Also, the Hwaseong Ftress in Suwon is designated as National Treasure UNESCO world Hertage site.
>>Correct!
I\'m so proud of it as a citizen in Suwon and I\'m still living here.
>>I'm so proud to be a citizen of Suwon and I'm still living here.
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