Homework_Jan 14
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
Writing Task: Do you think people who exercise are happier than those who don’t? Why or why not? Make a short essay about this.
I think people who exercise are happier than those who don\'t.
By exercising, we can feel satisfaction for what we have done. It\'s a part of achievement.
We can also relieve stress when exercising. It can make people who exercise feel happy.
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~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
By exercising, we can feel satisfaction for what we have done.
>>CORRECT
It\'s a part of achievement.
>>It\'s a part of the achievement.
We can also relieve stress when exercising.
>>CORRECT
It can make people who exercise feel happy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It can make people happy.
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