Homework_Jan 6
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Task: What makes you happy? Make a short essay about this.
My daily lifes with my baby girl make me happy. She is growing fast and showing her progress every day. Today, she is standing up for 3 seconds by herself for the first time. I was very pleased and happy to see it. I don\'t have any special big event in my routine days these days but small changes and progress of my baby is my big happiness.
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework today.
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~Teacher Sheila
>>My daily life with my baby girl makes me happy.
She is growing fast and showing her progress every day.
>>She is growing fast and showing her progress every day.
OR>>She is growing fast and showing progress every day.
Today, she is standing up for 3 seconds by herself for the first time.
>>Today, she stand for 3 seconds by herself for the first time.
I was very pleased and happy to see it.
>>CORRECT
I don\'t have any special big event in my routine days these days but small changes and progress of my baby is my big happiness.
>>I don\'t have any special big events in my routine these days but small changes and progress of my baby are my biggest happiness.
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