Homework_Jan 7
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
Writing Task: What the advantages of learning English? Make a short essay about this.
The reason why I have learned English at first was to feel an interest in English expressions, pronunciation and its well-organized structure. By learning English, I can build up how to think differently using English.
In addition, I got my job thanks to English. I started my job as an overseas sales manager and had many chances to trip aboard. It was good experience.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! I noticed your deep interests in learning English.
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>The reason why I learned English at first was because I was interested in English expressions, pronunciation and its well-organized structure.
By learning English, I can build up how to think differently using English.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
In addition, I got my job thanks to English.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In addition, I got my job because of English.
I started my job as an overseas sales manager and had many chances to trip aboard.
>>I started my job as an overseas sales manager and had many chances to go on a trip abroad.
OR>>I started my job as an overseas sales manager so I had many chances to visit places abroad.
It was good experience.
>>It was a good experience.
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