Homework_Jan 8
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
Writing Task: What are your fears as a person and as a mother? Make a short essay about this.
I feel this queston is too abstract and difficult for me. I do not think much about it so far.
As a mother, I hope my daughter grow healthy and happy. However, sometimes we may argue with something or not understand each other. In that case, I have no idea about how to deal with it. However, I don\'t fear that situations. I think we will find a good way to solve problems.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I like your positive outlook about things in regards to your daughter. :)
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>I feel this question is too abstract and too difficult for me.
I do not think much about it so far.
>>CORRECT
As a mother, I hope my daughter grow healthy and happy.
>>As a mother, I hope my daughter grows healthy and happy.
However, sometimes we may argue with something or not understand each other.
>>However, sometimes we may argue over something or not understand each other.
In that case, I have no idea about how to deal with it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In that case, I don\'t have any idea how to deal with it.
However, I don\'t fear that situations.
>>CORRECT
I think we will find a good way to solve problems.
>>CORRECT
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