Homework-January 10
학생이 쓴 원문
If you were given the chance to live in a different country, which country would you want to live?
I want to live in Canada because my sister lives in Canada and the weather is cold. I like cold weather.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Alvin! ^^,
Thank you for doing your homework today.
I hope you had a sumptuous dinner!
~ Jacey
I want to live in Canada because my sister lives in Canada and the weather is cold. I like cold weather.
>>> I want to live in Canada because my sister lives there and because of the weather. I like cold weather.
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