Homework-January 12

2018-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

학생이 쓴 원문

~ Agree or Disagree? "We must always obey our parents." I'm disagree. I think sometimes we have to believe oneself and choose or doing something.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name].

Thank you for doing your homework today.

I agree with what you have said.

There are times that we do not obey our parents.

Even if we respect them a lot, we also have to follow what we think is right.


I wish a happy weekend!

Good night! :)


~ Jacey


I\'m disagree.

>> I disagree.


I think sometimes we have to believe oneself and choose or doing something.

>> I think, we sometimes have to make our own decisions and believe in oneself when we do something.

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