Homework-January 12
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Agree or Disagree?
"We must always obey our parents."
I'm disagree. I think sometimes we have to believe oneself and choose or doing something.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name].
Thank you for doing your homework today.
I agree with what you have said.
There are times that we do not obey our parents.
Even if we respect them a lot, we also have to follow what we think is right.
I wish a happy weekend!
Good night! :)
~ Jacey
I\'m disagree.
>> I disagree.
I think sometimes we have to believe oneself and choose or doing something.
>> I think, we sometimes have to make our own decisions and believe in oneself when we do something.
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