Homework-January 17

2018-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

학생이 쓴 원문

Was there ever a time in your life where you felt really sad or depressed? How were you able to overcome this situation? When I was a baby, my parents left me at home and went to the market. I overcame that cried in my sister's arm and vomited

강사 첨삭

Hi, ALVIN! :)
Thank you for doing your homework today.

I couldn\'t imagine you crying and vomiting. :D

See you on Friday!


Take care!

~ Jacey



When I was a baby, my parents left me at home and went to the market. I overcame that cried in my sister\'s arm and vomited

>> When I was a baby, my parents left me at home and they went to the market. I cried in my sister\'s arm and I vomited.

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