Homework-January 22
학생이 쓴 원문
They say that friends are our second family. Do you have a lot of friends?
Is friendship really important?
Yes I have.
I think friendship is important. Like the proverb "A friend in need is a friend indeed." indeed friends will help me when I need help.
강사 첨삭
Hi, ALVIN! :)
Thank you for doing your homework today. I hope you have a wonderful evening!
Take care!
~ Jacey
Yes I have.
>> Yes, I have a lot of friends.
I think friendship is important.
>> Correct!
Like the proverb \"A friend in need is a friend indeed.\" indeed friends will help me when I need help.
>> There is a proverb that goes, \"A friend in need is a friend indeed.\" And indeed, friends will help me whenever I their help.
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