Homework January 4th Monday
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hi Claire!
Wow you have a lot of goals. I hope you can make all of them come true. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I have many goals for 2021.
>>CORRECT!
I have many things to accomplish and make myself be a better person.
>>CORRECT!
First, for studying part in English, I want to make my grammar skill better.
>>First, for studying in English, I want to make my grammar skills better.
Then, I can speak correct English.
>>CORRECT!
My speaking skill and writing skill will be better.
>>CORRECT!
Studying part in mathematics, I need to do my best in this part.
>>When it comes to studying mathematics, I need to do my best in this part.
Mathematics is the hardest part and the part that I’m not good at.
>>CORRECT!
Second, I will take care of my cat really hard.
>>Second, I will take care of my cat really well.
Pet is a member of a family.
>>A pet is a part of family.
They can’t say.
>>They can\'t talk.
So, I need to help them many times.
>>CORRECT!
Third, I think I need to exercise steadily.
>>CORRECT!
I’m getting lazy because I didn’t go out many times than before this pandemic happened.
>>I’m getting lazy because I haven\'t gone out a lot since this pandemic happened.
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