Homework-January 5

2018-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

학생이 쓴 원문

If you were given a choice between being given great wisdom or great wealth, which would you choose and why? I'll choose great wisdom. when I become wise, I'll make a lot of money by inventing something or working on a good company.

강사 첨삭

Hi, ALVIN! :)
Thank you for doing your homework today. I hope you have a wonderful weekend!
Take care!


~ Jacey



 I\'ll choose great wisdom.

>> Correct!


when I become wise, I\'ll make a lot of money by inventing something or working on a good company.

>> When I become wise, I\'ll make a lot of money by inventing something or working in a good company.

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