Homework(Jeollabuk-do)

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing about your country. I have tried bibimbap once. And I liked it.

I wish I could also visit that place you mentioned here. Have a nice day! ^^

~~May~~

Korea has a long history, a culture and tradition in various regions.

>> Korea has a long history, has culture and traditions in various regions.

I would like to introduce Jeollabuk-do which is a major tourist destination.

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For example,Jeonju Hanok Village is so popular nowadays.

>> Jeonju Hanok Village is so popular nowadays.

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Lots of people go there and experience traditional Hanok (a traditional Korean house).

While we are walking on traditional streets, we feel like we\'re living in those days.

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We can also enjoy a variety of Korean traditional culture and watch various traditional performances.

>> We can also enjoy different Korean traditional cultures and watch various traditional performances.

Besides, we can taste delicious traditional food.

>> Also, we can taste delicious traditional foods.

I would like to recommend bibimbap among them.

Bibimbap mixed with vegetables and meat, which are clean and fresh from various regions, is famous.

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Adding sesame oil will make you taste fantastic.

>> Adding sesame oil will make it taste fantastic.

All the materials came from the vast plains, mountains, and waters of Korea.

Mt. Naejang is famous for its maple leaves so there are many people from all over the country who come to see the beauty of the mountains covered with various colors in autumn.

How about Jeollabuk-do~?

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