Homework June28

2016-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

학생이 쓴 원문

Makgeolli is alcoholic drink of korean traditional to be made to use rice, weat, water etc. The colar is light yellow andr similar with yoghut. It's taste is sweet and soupy and a little bitter. The accohol degree is 4~6%. There are many sort of taste according to mixed something. 1. While it wasn’t great the movie, we saw last night wasn’t bad either. 2. Paula was tired, hungry, and grumpy. 3. No, that isn’t what I said. 4. If you lie to your friends,they won’t trust you in the future. 5. It was the Belgians, not the French who won the tournament.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [이름]! ^^   Good evening! :) Thanks for making time to explain about Makgeolli and for answering your homework! You did a wonderful job! Study harder and keep it up!! See you! :)   Teacher Carmen ^^   Makgeolli is alcoholic drink of korean traditional to be made to use rice, weat, water etc. >> Makgeolli is a Korean traditional alcoholic beverage which is made of rice, wheat, water and etc.The colar is light yellow andr similar with yoghut. >> The color is light yellow and it is similar with yoghurt.It\'s taste is sweet and soupy and a little bitter. >> It\'s sweet but a little bitter too.The accohol degree is 4~6%. >> The alcohol content is 4-6%.There are many sort of taste according to mixed something.>> There are many sorts of tastes and it depends on what it is mixed with. 1. While it wasn’t great the movie, we saw last night wasn’t bad either. >>While it wasn’t great, the movie we saw last night wasn’t bad either. 2. Paula was tired, hungry, and grumpy. >> Correct!3. No, that isn’t what I said. >> Correct!4. If you lie to your friends,they won’t trust you in the future. >> Correct!5. It was the Belgians, not the French who won the tournament. >> It was the Belgians, not the French, who won the tournament.        

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