HOMEWORK~!! K-)
학생이 쓴 원문
1.
When I was bored at home, I play the computer game or I watch some dramas on Netflix for improve my English.
Nowadays, I love to watch American dramas which is \'Modern family\'.
So there is no day when I was bored.
I think I am good at hanging out alone at home.
I got used to playing alone at home.
2.
I assume entertainment is really important.
Many people get stressed by various mediums which are to work or other people.
Therefore, many people got stressed are exhausted.
Now, they want to relieve stress and they can relieve stress by way of entertainment.
In modern times, there are many entertainment near the city.
For example they can do entertainments which are to play screen golf or watching a singer concert or to do various activities sports in a building and stuff.
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Lucy
When I was bored at home, I play the computer game or I watch some dramas on Netflix for improve my English.
>>When I was bored at home, I play the computer games or I watch some dramas on Netflix for the improvement of my English skills.
Nowadays, I love to watch American dramas which is \'Modern family\'.
Nowadays, I love to watch American dramas which is \'Modern family\'.
>>CORRECT!
So there is no day when I was bored.
So there is no day when I was bored.
>>So there is no day I am bored.
I think I am good at hanging out alone at home.
>>I think I am good at enjoying myself alone at home.
I got used to playing alone at home.
>>CORRECT!
I assume entertainment is really important.
>>CORRECT!
Many people get stressed by various mediums which are to work or other people.
Many people get stressed by various mediums which are to work or other people.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, many people got stressed are exhausted.
Therefore, many people got stressed are exhausted.
>>CORRECT!
Now, they want to relieve stress and they can relieve stress by way of entertainment.
Now, they want to relieve stress and they can relieve stress by way of entertainment.
>>CORRECT!
In modern times, there are many entertainment near the city.
In modern times, there are many entertainment near the city.
>>CORRECT!
For example they can do entertainments which are to play screen golf or watching a singer concert or to do various activities sports in a building and stuff.
For example they can do entertainments which are to play screen golf or watching a singer concert or to do various activities sports in a building and stuff.
>>CORRECT!
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