Homework Keunwon Kim
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: What has been the best year in your life? Please answer in complete sentences.
If i have to choose the best year, i would choose the year, 2018, I mean, now. This is becaues I am so glad that I can apply to the college which i wanted to go as a pilot major with IELTS grade. To be honest,I am quite afraid of whether I can endure being in America or not, but I believe that everything will be worth the effort.
P.S: Teacher mia, I am so sorry that I postponed again yesterday, I had to go to a private language school which is located in 강남(seoul) and called IEN Institute for counseling. Therefore, I can improve my english skills, they teach students with all subjects such as Reading, Writing, Listening and Speaking that I have to be ready before studying abroad. They said the time i have to take will be at 10 am to 5 pm, so that I will try to join your class another time. I sincerely hope that we can meet again!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for answering the question.
I will surely miss talking to you.
Have fun studying English.
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
If i have to choose the best year, i would choose the year, 2018, I mean, now. This is becaues I am so glad that I can apply to the college which i wanted to go as a pilot major with IELTS grade. To be honest,I am quite afraid of whether I can endure being in America or not, but I believe that everything will be worth the effort.
>> If I have to choose the best year of my life, it would be this year 2018. I am so glad that I can apply to the university which I wanted to study as a pilot. To be honest, I am scared if I can live in America for a long time or not but I believe that everything will be worth the effort.
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