HOMEWORK~!! :l
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a question
What\'s the difference?
I will close a store and I will closed a store
Is it \'closed\' past tense???
1.
I guess a daredevil is a brave person or a person of firm decision. But a good thing or a bad thing depends on the situation. If a daredevil doesn\'t have nothing, doing action anything is a bad thing. And If a daredevil have a perfect plan, they will do a careful choice is good thing. So a good daredevil also has leadership. Koreans call a daredevil either stupid or brave.
2.
I don\'t like to do extreme things. But I respect some people love to do extreme things. Because I think they are challenging people and they knew to make themselves happy in their life. But doing extreme things are very dangerous things and they also knew it. I also want to overcome oneself by doing extreme things which are Sky diving and Bungee jumping.
강사 첨삭
Thank you An! :)
~Teacher Lucy
I will close a store. (This sentence is correct)
I will closed a store. (It\'s grammatically incorrect) CLOSED is past tense so you should not partner with \"will\". Will is use for future activities. :)
I guess a daredevil is a brave person or a person of firm decision.
>>CORRECT!
But a good thing or a bad thing depends on the situation.
>>CORRECT!
If a daredevil doesn\'t have nothing, doing action anything is a bad thing.
>>If a daredevil doesn\'t have anything, doing something is a bad thing.
And If a daredevil have a perfect plan, they will do a careful choice is good thing.
>>And if a daredevil has a perfect plan, doing in a careful way is a good thing.
So a good daredevil also has leadership.
>>CORRECT!
Koreans call a daredevil either stupid or brave.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t like to do extreme things.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t like to do extreme things.
>>CORRECT!
But I respect some people love to do extreme things.
>>But I respect some people who love to do extreme things.
Because I think they are challenging people and they knew to make themselves happy in their life.
>> Because I think they are challenging people and they knew to how to make their selves happy in their life.
But doing extreme things are very dangerous things and they also knew it.
>>CORRECT!
I also want to overcome oneself by doing extreme things which are Sky diving and Bungee jumping.
>>CORRECT!
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