Homework last week
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay: Where is your dream place for traveling?
I wish I want to travel to iceland for aurora , glacier
My brother - in law has been to there
I envey him and I am proud of him ^^
See you later ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
This is an awesome photo! Who took this photo? I wish I could travel to Finland to see the Aurora too. Maybe in the future, we can do that too.^^
-Rachel
I wish I want to travel to iceland for aurora , glacier
>> I wish I could travel to Iceland to see the aurora and the glacier.
My brother - in law has been to there
>> My brother-in-law has been there .
I envey him and I am proud of him.
I envey him and I am proud of him.
>> I envy him, but I am proud of him.
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