Homework-Lesson 12
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I think the best hobby is the reading,
I envy people who enjoy reading books.
2. I think hobbies help relieve stress and develop yourself.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
Great job sharing your thoughts about hobbies! I like that you explained why reading is special to you. Just remember not to use \'the\' before general activities like reading, and try to keep your sentences smooth and connected. Keep up the good work — your ideas are clear and thoughtful!
~Teacher Polly
>>I think the best hobby is reading.
I envy people who enjoy reading books.
>>CORRECT
I think hobbies help relieve stress and develop yourself.
>>I think hobbies help relieve stress and help you develop yourself.
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