Homework / Lesson 6-Nov 25
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I think things go well, when I\'m free worries or personal problems.
2. I\'m little lazy so I can\'t always go as planned, but I try to do as planned.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
You expressed your thoughts honestly, and that’s great! It’s nice that you recognize how being worry-free helps you do better and that you still try to follow your plans even when it’s hard. Just be careful with sentence structure and articles (for example, “free from worries” instead of “free worries”). Keep practicing, and you’ll continue to improve! Good effort!
~Teacher Polly
>>I think things go well when I’m free from worries or personal problems.
2. I\'m little lazy so I can\'t always go as planned, but I try to do as planned.
>>I’m a little lazy, so I can’t always follow my plans perfectly, but I try to stick to them as much as I can.
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