Homework-Lesson 8
학생이 쓴 원문
Conversation Questions
3. I want to learn guitar instead of learning English.
Homework
1. My goal is to keep studying English and exercises for my health.
and My short term or long term plans are the same.
2. of course and I think we also need to help them experience a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
Good job sharing your goals and ideas! I like that you clearly explained both your English and health goals. Just remember to use articles like “the” for instruments (e.g., the guitar) and capitalize the first word in a sentence. Keep practicing — your sentences are getting clearer and more organized!
~Teacher Polly
Conversation Questions
3. I want to learn guitar instead of learning English.
>>I want to learn the guitar instead of learning English.
Homework
1. My goal is to keep studying English and exercises for my health.
and My short term or long term plans are the same.
>>My goal is to continue studying English and exercising for my health. My short-term and long-term plans are the same.
2. of course and I think we also need to help them experience a lot.
>>Of course, and I think we also need to help them have many experiences.
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