Homework-Lesson 9
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Coffee is good but drinking too much it isn\'t good for your health.
2. I can\'t drink much, but I enjoy having a drink.
when I\'m drinking casual conversations are the best.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
Good job expressing your thoughts about coffee and drinking! I like how you shared your personal opinion and added a social aspect with conversations. Just remember to check sentence structure and punctuation, like adding a comma after “When I’m drinking” to make it clear. Keep practicing — your sentences are becoming more natural!
~Teacher Polly
Coffee is good but drinking too much it isn\'t good for your health.
>>Coffee is good, but drinking too much is not good for your health.
I can\'t drink much, but I enjoy having a drink.
>>CORRECT
when I\'m drinking casual conversations are the best.
>>When I’m drinking, casual conversations are the best.
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