homework & Lesson1
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Emily and Greg (comes, come) to my house every Friday for lunch.
-> Emily and Greg come to my house every Friday for lunch.
2. There (is, are) time to watch the movie.
-> There is time to watch the movie.
3. My friends who are in the band (wants, want) me to play a musical instrument.
-> MY friends who are in the band want me to play a musical instument.
4. My father or my brothers (is, are) coming with me to the ball game.
-> My father or my brothers are coming with me to the ball game.
5. Everyone (needs, need) time to relax.
-> Everyone needs time to relax.
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[Lesson1. Introduce myself]
My name is [이름] and I'm 25 years old. i live in chunchun with my family. there are four people in my family; Father, Mother, Younger brother and me. I majored in Accounting at KANGWON UNIV.and graduated 2 years ago. Now, I'm trying to find a job. I'd like to find a career in accounting. I hope to be the best in my field someday. I like music all of the genre. So, whenever I have free time, I enjoy listening to music.
강사 첨삭
Hey there [이름]!^^
I think you will really become an exceptional accountant in the future. I can see how hard you work and I know that it will all pay off. I\'m happy to have you as my student. I\'ll do my best as well to assist you in your goals in English. The paragraph that you make for lesson 1 is very well done. You may familiarize yourself then to this one and you\'ll be good to go.^^ See you in class!
---T. Leny
1. Emily and Greg (comes, come) to my house every Friday for lunch.-> Emily and Greg come to my house every Friday for lunch.
>>Correct!2. There (is, are) time to watch the movie.-> There is time to watch the movie.>>Correct!
3. My friends who are in the band (wants, want) me to play a musical instrument.-> MY friends who are in the band want me to play a musical instument.>> Correct!
4. My father or my brothers (is, are) coming with me to the ball game.-> My father or my brothers are coming with me to the ball game.>>Correct!
5. Everyone (needs, need) time to relax.-> Everyone needs time to relax.
>>Correct!=================================================================================[Lesson1. Introduce myself]My name is [이름] and I\'m 25 years old.
>>Correct!
OR (More formal)
>>>I am [이름] and I\'m 25 years old.
i live in chunchun with my family. there are four people in my family; Father, Mother, Younger brother and me.
>>I live in Chunchun with my family. There are four people in my family: my father, mother, younger brother and me.
OR
>>>I live in Chunchun with my family. My parents and a younger brother.
I majored in Accounting at KANGWON UNIV.and graduated 2 years ago.
>>I majored in Accounting at Kangwon University and graduated 2 years ago.
OR
>>>I graduated Accounting at Kangwon University two years ago.
Now, I\'m trying to find a job.
>>I\'m trying to find a job now.
OR
>>>I\'m looking for a job currently.
I\'d like to find a career in accounting.
>>Correct!
OR
>>>I would like to have a career in the accounting field.
I hope to be the best in my field someday.
>>Correct!
I like music all of the genre.
>>I like all genre of music.
OR
>>>I like music of all genre.
So, whenever I have free time, I enjoy listening to music.
>>Correct!
OR
>>>Listening to music is my favorite past time.
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