Homework(Lunar new year's day)

Hi [이름]! How was your lunch? Were you full? ^^

Yes. My city is a mountainous area. It is the coolest city. Baguio is the summer capital of the Philippines.

Many people go here in summer to enjoy the cool weather. It is always cool because it\'s highland.

In terms of transportation, jeepney, bus, and taxi are very common for commuters.

There is no train or subway here. There is an airport but it\'s private. So we really have to travel for long hours going to our hometown by car or bus.

It takes 3 hours for me to get to my hometown by car, and 7 hours going to Manila (the capital of the Philippines) by car or bus.

By the way, I made some corrections in your grammar. You wrote good sentences and our errors are very minimal. ^^

See you! ^^

~~May~~

I find that your city on the Youtube.

>> I found your city on Youtube.

I find it also have beautiful nature and culture~

>> I found out that it has a beautiful nature and culture.
If you live in Korea, you can experience many kinds of holidays directly.

>> If you live in Korea, you can experience many kinds of holidays.

In the beginning of the year, Korean celebrate Seollal(Lunar New Year\'s day) with their family.

>> In the beginning of the year, (Koreans) celebrate Seollal (Lunar New Year\'s day) with their family.

The Lunar New Year\'s day come again after two weeks.

>> Lunar New Year\'s Day will come after two weeks.

Lots of people going up& down to their hometown on The Lunar New Year\'s day.

>> Lots of people go back and forth to their hometown on the Lunar New Year\'s Day.

Yesterday, I could reserve a ticket for My hometown luckily.

>> Yesterday, I was able to reserve a ticket going to my hometown.

I also thank God for having the ticket for my hometown. Because, train tickets for the Seollal holiday were sold out almost as soon as they were issued. 

>> I also thank God for I was able to have a ticket going to my hometown because train tickets for the Seollal holiday were already sold out as soon as they were issued. 
Usually I use the train(KTX)on the holiday, because it\'s very convenient and I can go my hometown in 1~2 hours.

>> Usually, I use the train (KTX) on holidays,because it\'s very convenient and I can go to my hometown in 1~2 hours.

If I use my car on that day, it takes a long time to go there and it\'s so hard for my two young kids to stay inside of cars for hours.

>> If I use my car on that day, it takes a long time to get there and it\'s so hard for my two young kids travel by car for a long time.

After our family arrive at our hometown, We feast on rice cake soup to celebrate the New Year.

>> After my family and I arrive in our hometown, we feast on rice cake soup to celebrate the New Year.

Teacher I am hungry, I go out for lunch~!

>> Teacher I am hungry. I will go out for lunch!