Homework(Make me feel better)
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Teacher ELLY.
Homework(Make me feel better)
There must be a lot of situations that makes me feel uncomfortable and even offended.
CORRECT!
or>>There are lots of situations where I can become very uncomfortable and even feel offended.
Whenever I experience these kind of feelings, there are several ways to deal with my emotions.
>>Whenever I experience these kinds of feelings, there are several ways I do to deal with my emotions.
First one is tending to be easy going, which means even if there is something annoying me, if I can embrace it, it would not be a big deal for me.
>>The first one is, I tend to be very easy going, which means even if there is something annoying me but if I can embrace it, it would not be such a big deal.
Second one is talking about it with my friends.
>>The second one is to talk about it with my friends.
I think this is the best method because actually first one could be a bit hard for everyone when they get angry and annoyed.
>>I think, this is the best method because, actually, the first one could be a bit hard for everyone when they get angry and annoyed.
Sometimes, it is better to complain about something with close friends, not just bare with it.
>>Sometimes, it is better to complain about it with your close friends, and not just to bear with it.
Just baring with it could even make me unconfident in myself.
>>Just bearing with it could even make me less confident in myself.
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