Homework(Make me feel better)

2019-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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There must be a lot of situations that makes me feel uncomfortable and even offended. Whenever I experience these kind of feelings, there are several ways to deal with my emotions. First one is tending to be easy going, which means even if there is something annoying me, if I can embrace it, it would not be a big deal for me. Second one is talking about it with my friends. I think this is the best method because actually first one could be a bit hard for everyone when they get angry and annoyed. Sometimes, it is better to complain about something with close friends, not just bare with it. Just baring with it could even make me unconfident in myself.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jay,

Thank you for today’s homework!

Please keep up the good work!

Have a great day!

Teacher ELLY.

Homework(Make me feel better)

There must be a lot of situations that makes me feel uncomfortable and even offended.

CORRECT!

or>>There are lots of situations where I can become very uncomfortable and even feel offended.

Whenever I experience these kind of feelings, there are several ways to deal with my emotions.

>>Whenever I experience these kinds of feelings, there are several ways I do to deal with my emotions.

First one is tending to be easy going, which means even if there is something annoying me, if I can embrace it, it would not be a big deal for me.

>>The first one is, I tend to be very easy going, which means even if there is something annoying me but if I can embrace it, it would not be such a big deal.

Second one is talking about it with my friends.

>>The second one is to talk about it with my friends.

I think this is the best method because actually first one could be a bit hard for everyone when they get angry and annoyed.

>>I think, this is the best method because, actually, the first one could be a bit hard for everyone when they get angry and annoyed.

Sometimes, it is better to complain about something with close friends, not just bare with it.

>>Sometimes, it is better to complain about it with your close friends, and not just to bear with it.

Just baring with it could even make me unconfident in myself.

>>Just bearing with it could even make me less confident in myself.

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