Homework(Mar/5)
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
What is the MOST valuable thing in life that you have right now? (:
-> The most valuable thing is in my life is the time for me.
As i let you know last time, i don't want to spend my meaningless time. Of course, it never be mean to the time like that just now.
Due to c[이름]ge of work formation i had good c[이름]ce of excessive time. and i am going to use properly the time. I have chose already English class and i am trying to learn a sports climbing in weekend too.
Children resemble their parents.
As my children look at conduct which enjoy my hobby in a lifetime, they would follow my life pattern.
Busy and happy wednesday ~ Wendy!^^
I am moving now by car for audit!
See you later~!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]n.
Another JOB WELL DONE with the homewerk I gave you.
I really enjoy reading your compositions.
How\'s your evening?
Here are your corrections.
See you tomorrow.
-T. WENDY ^^
The most valuable thing is in my life is the time for me.
>> The most valuable thing in my life is my personal time.As i let you know last time, i don\'t want to spend my meaningless time.
>> As I told you, I don\'t want to spend a meaningless time.
Of course, it never be mean to the time like that just now.
>>Ofcourse, it doesn\'t mean the time now.Due to c[이름]ge of work formation i had good c[이름]ce of excessive time. >> Due to the c[이름]ge of work formation, I have a good c[이름]ce of excessive time.
and i am going to use properly the time.
>>Ans I am going to use the time properly.
I have chose already English class and i am trying to learn a sports climbing in weekend too. >>I already chose this English class and I am also trying to learn a sport called climbing in the weekend too.
Children resemble their parents.
>>CorrectAs my children look at conduct which enjoy my hobby in a lifetime, they would follow my life pattern.>>As my children see and conduct which I enjoy as my hobbies in a lifetime, they would follow my life pattern.Busy and happy wednesday ~ Wendy!^^
>>CorrectI am moving now by car for audit!
>>I am driving my car for audit.See you later~!
>>Correct
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