Homework-March 16
학생이 쓴 원문
Can you give some examples of when the common man has an edge over a celebrity? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
He's name is Chungjae Kim. He is just a common painter, but he is really handsome. Someday he appeared in the TV show, 'I live alone'. Than he became famous. Later he got more chances to appear in the other TV shows.
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Keep it up!
~~ Teacher Sharon
He\'s name is Chungjae Kim.
>> His name is Chungjae Kim.
He is just a common painter, but he is really handsome.
>> Correct
Someday he appeared in the TV show, \'I live alone\'.
>> One day, he appeared on a TV show called \'I live alone\'.
Than he became famous.
>> Then, he became famous.
Later he got more chances to appear in the other TV shows.
>> Later he got more chances to appear in other TV shows.
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